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You were laying on the bed after what happened that you were following the green bunny and fell into warp hole that everything was just a dream but there was just one huge problem that something's not right. You were complete paralyzed that you couldn't move, talk, or open your eyes, and you're not laying on your own bed or your parents'; this bed is lot more comfortable it feels like you are laying on fluffy clouds. You have no idea what's going on and you scared like you've been kidnapped. Suddenly you can hear unfamiliar voices

"She can see you?!" It was a man you heard

"Yeah, she followed me and she fell into warp hole." It was a cute high pitched voice you also heard

"Dude, Arthur! I want to help this chick too! Can I help? Can I help please?!" It was another man begging with cheery voice

"No! Besides this is only I can do! So wait for me outside and I'll be out with her." That man that sounded like he is British.

You couldn't hear them closely because they're at the other room.

"No fair! You just want her all to yourself!" The man yelled with hyper voice. "Are you still talking to invisible friend? What a weirdo, even though you're a man"

"No I Don't! Just wait us okay?" The British man yelled at him. "And don't call me weirdo, you git!"

You can hear footsteps approaching to your room. When he open the door, your eyes were still closed like you are sleeping. He turned around and he sees his magical bunny. "Would you mind give me some potion that you guys made?" He asked

"One special potion, coming up!" the little bunny cheered

The British man come into your room, he grabbed the chair sitting right beside you. He has confusion look on his face that you can see the flying creature. Not every human or someone he knows that no one can see his magical friend but you. The man placed his hand on your forehead to see if you have a fever which don't have it. As you feel his warm hand touches your head, you moaned and you slowly open your (eye color) eyes half open and look at him. You couldn't see him very well because your eye sight is blurry.

"Oh, good, you're up." he said as you hear his voice is more like far-off distance

"Arthur! I got the potion!" Flying bunny said as she comes in to your room and gives the bottle to him

"Thanks" he said to the bunny

He open the bottle and carefully slips your lips and drink it. After 5 seconds, your eyes are wide open as you gasp for relief and coughed as you sit up and look at the man and the flying bunny creature. That man has a thick eyebrows with blonde hair. He looks very familiar.

"Take it easy. You're okay now." he said as you laid back down. "Can I talk to her in private? You can move along and play with the others". he asked his bunny friend as she left the room.

"Who...are you? What happened to me?" you asked him.

"I"m Arthur Kirkland and you're in bad shape right now because you fell into the hole where you followed my magical bunny friend. You see,
that warp hole you fell in that can take you many places. The warp hole that only magical creature that can through but when you fell in, the power of the hole has sucked you strength that can be harm you and other humans. Thanks to my friends, flying mint bunny dragged me to the chamber and I found you on the floor unconscious after I saw the hole disappeared. However, the hole only appears every month and we're trying our best to get you home but there's no other way."

"What are you talking about?" you asked as you got up. "Where am I?" you panicked

"You could say, you're in dimension world." Arthur said as he felt unsure of what he said and you looked around. "This is my house, by the way." he said as you get out of his bed.

"No. I have to go back home. My parents doesn't know that I'm gone!" you said as you tried to stand but Arthur stopped you.

"It's okay. They're not going to find out because your world doesn't time passes since you're in this world." he said. "This is the world of the will."

"Are you some kind of wizard?" you asked

"Sort of." he said. "Now, let's get you fix. I can tell you all the details I have." he said as he grabbed your arm and wrapped around his neck to hold to help you walk since you're still feel a little weak. "So, what's your name?"

"I'm (Name). And thank you, by the way."


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Romacat Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
When reader asked him if was a wizard I was like "You're a wizard Arthur!" Lol I'm so lame! XD
WendyMarvel1010 Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconiggybrowsplz: Those eyebrows though.
naomiphantomhive1 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Student General Artist
Hetalia564 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I could see Iggy-brows doing a one shoulder shrug when saying "Sort of." for some reasons. Besides that, this is really good!
xX1HetaliaLuver1Xx Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Is English your first language? It's hard to understand a lot of this including the prologue but it's an amazing story
pinkypromise20 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013
I mean it's a virus.
pinkypromise20 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
It's not me it's my laptop keeps messing with my stories sometimes even I tried to fix the errors but thank you
xX1HetaliaLuver1Xx Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ohhhh that sucks and no prob
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